All entertaining stories seem to share one particular element- the ability to let the reader connect with one or more of the characters (usually the main). Not only do I seem to possess that skill... I also seem to have the tendency of depicting our least favorable traits, which makes it hard for readers to admit that they can relate. In doing so, however, a natural twist is added to my writing, which may also be what draws a reader in. Well that, and I like to make dramas humorous... realistically so. So be prepared for situational irony.

I am an aspiring writer, with still very little experience.
Although, I'm sure some constructive criticism on your part will do me an immense amount of good, what with you being such experienced writers and all.

Please read my first original story and tell me what you think. I must request, however, that if you have something to say about a certain chapter, please review *that* chapter. Thank you for your time; I appreciate it.

MaidenName: Kollina Inverse
Former Name: Kala Khan Nahda

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