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Author has written 34 stories for Life, General, Fantasy, Love, War, Haiku, Religion, Nature, and Essay. Amo and we're back! new profile coming soon! Hi. My name is Devon, and I am rather fond of reviews. If you review, don't shy away from constructive criticism - it's an artist's best friend. I try to be prompt in reviewing back, and if I like your work, I might even review it all. Some of my better poems are: The haiku "The Last Midnight Snack" might make you laugh. Read it for a kick. I could also use some help with the following: I am currently taking a creative writing class, and thus will be writing (and therefore posting) more often than usual. Adieu. | |||||||||
1. Magic I've Been Craving reviewsEnthralled by the possibilities in a shadow. Pay attention and ponder every little detail of this poem there's a surprising amount going on for 28 words. Written after realising that William Carlos Williams is in fact a genius and not a charlatan.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-23-07 - Published: 3-23-072. Untitiled reviewsless words than most haiku, and I try to make each one of them count. read this. it's stunning.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-23-07 - Published: 3-23-073. Four Pantoums » reviewsOne is droll, two suggest stories, the last is concerned with form. Pantoums are a fun format, and if you've never encountered it, check these out!Complete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-23-07 - Published: 3-23-074. Contemplating Matricide reviewsA poem about writer's block. Not my usual style, but it has a passion to it.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-4-07 - Published: 1-4-075. Safe as Chocolate... unable to tear myself from the view while absolutely willing to tear myself apart...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-4-07 - Published: 1-4-076. Unfinished and Derived from Oranges reviewsa beautiful love poem not for the squeamishLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-3-07 - Published: 1-3-077. Haiku After SushiI have a tradition that after anytime I eat japanese food, I write a haiku. Corny, but hey, it does the job.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-24-06 - Published: 12-24-068. This is a major scaleagitation at least means you're getting through it, right?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-24-06 - Published: 12-24-069. Who Wrote the Ode to JoyBut it was worth it.Part two of two.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 386 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-24-06 - Published: 12-24-0610. Beethoven was a Deaf Man reviewsI didn't say hello to anyone for a week just to write this poem. Part one of two.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-24-06 - Published: 12-24-0611. The Story is Simple, the Circumstances were not reviews"we pause on the point of evaporation..." rated M for SEX!Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-17-05 - Published: 11-17-0512. The Promised Land Life reviews"he left his imprint on the inside of our skin..."Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-15-05 - Published: 11-15-0513. Reality is Filled With Spiderwebs reviews"Children yell; the cacanophy solidifies around me from molten glass. I become agitated. "General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 264 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-11-05 - Published: 11-11-0514. Things that were missing one cold november night"Sleepless, I walk into the absent night..." A short bit of prose-poetry. Meant to be spoken word.Essay - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 344 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-11-05 - Published: 11-11-0515. Zen reviewsMeans alot to me, might mean nothing to you.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-19-05 - Published: 10-19-0516. In an Elemental Rage reviewsActual Title: Poem Written Upon Realising that Nature is Full of Elegant Designs but I Live in a Square Brick House.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 337 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-5-05 - Published: 10-5-0517. The Starving Squirrel reviewsFor a poem about being boring, this poem is suprisingly entertaining. Read it!Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-1-05 - Published: 10-1-0518. The Allegory of the Ants reviewsA short free-verse about inflated egos, and bringing them down. One of the best I've written, I think.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-25-05 - Published: 8-25-0519. To whom it may concern: reviewsIn this poem, I wonder whether I will ever find a lover. I don't like this, but my sister does. What do you think?Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-25-05 - Published: 8-25-0520. Serenity reviewsI am young, and inexperianced with love and seduction. At a recent music festival, I saw a girl, and, well, lust at first sight (because there is no love at first sight). And I didn't know what to do, so I left, and dreamt, and woke up with this dream,Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-26-04 - Published: 7-26-0421. In hot water reviewsAngsty-haiku that occured to me one winter morning, in the shower.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-26-04 - Published: 7-26-0422. Kanaka Creek reviewsFor AleppineNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-26-04 - Published: 7-26-0423. The Last Midnight Snack reviewsThis came out of some silliness with my siblings. 'Cause you know, if there was a last supper... Might offend the fundamentally Christian; if this is true, I look forward to my first flame.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-12-03 - Published: 12-12-0324. Un Homme Sans Passion reviewsJ'aime bien ecrire des haiku. Ils sont la poèsie ET un exercise mental.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - French - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-5-03 - Published: 12-5-0325. Perfect Moment reviewsTrue Face Shows...War - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-4-03 - Published: 12-4-0326. All the Wicked Things reviewsWhat do you do when You just can't face everything anymore, but you don't want to leave Her?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-4-03 - Published: 12-4-0327. All will Fall into Darkness reviewsOne of the first things I ever "wrote". One of the few examples of my pre-Aleppine (for she has been the greatest infuence on my style) writing. Elves. Civil Wars. The End.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 428 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-4-03 - Published: 12-4-0328. Go West reviewsTo me, there is a feeling inspired by directions... West for me is Romance, Wanderlust, and the Ocean...Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-4-03 - Published: 12-4-0329. Beer Hall Putsch reviewsThis could be one of two things: Something that I don't understand, or Just stupid poetry... About Writers Block and HormonesLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-30-03 - Published: 11-30-0330. On Midnight and Forests reviewsJust a little something about the night...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 455 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-6-03 - Published: 11-6-0331. Ambivalence reviewsI Hope that you Die. aLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 526 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-18-03 - Published: 10-18-0332. Forgotten Tommorows reviewsI wrote this because I could. I have no idea if it means anything. Nor do I care. Just r&r, please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-7-03 - Published: 9-7-0333. Animus reviewsreflections on my state of mind. some people might interpret this as a direct thing written to a lover...it's not. If anything, it's my reflections on the whole animus/anima thing...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 655 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-1-03 - Published: 7-1-0334. Boy of Summer reviewsTo a good friend of Mine, i wrote this to explain...I know not what... My First Post... R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-16-03 - Published: 5-16-03
