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Author has written 69 stories for General, Love, Friendship, Fantasy, War, Fantasy, Family, Religion, Life, Nature, and Humor. Wow! I have a visitor. Well hello there. So you want to know a bit about me? Well, I'm a 18 year old girl from the UK. I love reading and writing poery and would be delighted if you would take the time to read and review some of my work. Thank you so much. Every review will recieve one in return.
My favourite random verse: (at the moment) If I should die this very moment Favourite Quote: "Today I dropped a tear in the ocean, when they find it, I'll stop loving you." "Some nights I'd dream he'd written me, the bed a page beneath his writers hands" Carol Ann Duffy Just to add a quick note: In order to clear things up for the future I would like to say the following. I do not mind receiving negative reviews so long as they are constructive. How else would a writer be expected to improve with no constructive criticism to help them? What I simply detest, however, is people who leave simple-minded reviews stating that a poem 'sucks' or 'bites' without giving a plausible explanation as to why. Reviews are there to help the author improve, not to feed your obviously weening ego's by making others feel small in camparison. Thank you, though, to everybody who has ever left me a good or constuctive review. I much appreciate it. | |||||||
1. Your Tears reviewsWhen you, cry hurt me too.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-6-05 - Published: 11-6-052. Broken Silence reviewsI said I'd never rely on anybody else...I said I'd always be independant...but then I came to rely on youLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-6-05 - Published: 11-6-053. I hate You reviewsI hate the way you're so strong al the time...I hate the way I love you.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-9-05 - Published: 10-9-054. In my minds eye reviewsIn my minds eye you are with me everydayLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-9-05 - Published: 9-9-055. Gasoline Rainbows reviewsA love relationship that ends up in smokeLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-9-05 - Published: 9-9-056. Why God? reviewsDoubting GodReligion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-31-05 - Published: 8-31-057. Dream Catcher reviewsDreams of you are caught for me to seeLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-31-05 - Published: 8-31-058. True reviewsI only want youLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-31-05 - Published: 8-31-059. Innocence reviewsThe same repeated loss, the same repeated hurt. The only thing that changes if the life we abuse.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-16-05 - Published: 8-16-0510. I would do anything for love, but I won't reviewsThere is nothing that I wouldn't do to share all my love with you.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-16-05 - Published: 8-16-0511. Dead End reviewsNo matter what choices we make in life, and whichever road we choose to travel along, we all end up in the same place in the end.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-29-05 - Published: 7-29-0512. Tears reviewsThe very first tear drop from a new born babies eyes is only one teardrop of many more yet to come.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-29-05 - Published: 7-29-0513. My Box reviewsAll my feelings, all my emotion are locked away in a heart shaped box that only you have the key to.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-5-05 - Published: 7-5-0514. Young Girl's Don't cry reviewsThe bigger you get in this oversized world, the smaller you realise you are. You start life's journey with a run and a twirl, but soon you realise it's too farLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-5-05 - Published: 7-5-0515. Your Photograph reviewsThe photo of you shows a moment in time captured, frozen...if only our feelings had been frozen in that time too.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-31-05 - Published: 5-31-0516. I want reviewsI'm fed up of not getting what I want. I've coped all this time with nothing but not any more. I can't cope, dont want to cope, if I have to cope without you.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-31-05 - Published: 5-31-0517. Although reviewsAnd still my heart does ache, As at last I break down crying, because without you by my side, i know my soul is dieing. Plz Plz R&RLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-22-05 - Published: 4-22-0518. Would She?You choose to be with her and not me but would she do all the things I used to do, be all the things I used to be, sacrifice all I sacrificed?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-27-05 - Published: 1-27-0519. Sacrifice reviewsLoving someone so much that you would rather see them safe without you then in danger of ruining their own life whilst with you- despite how much it hurts.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 358 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-18-04 - Published: 12-18-0420. Young Girls Don't cry reviewsThe more you grow and the more you learn the less you realise you know. Plz R&R.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-29-04 - Published: 10-29-0421. The things You do reviewsIt's the little things you do that make you special to me. The way you're always there when I need you. The way I couldn't live without you. plz R&R.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-04 - Published: 10-29-0422. If I ain't got you reviewsPacking up, leaving this home we've shared, leaving behind all the memories. Taking with me only what matters.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-23-04 - Published: 10-23-0423. Your Song reviewsThe way you make me feel, that wonderful feeling inside, could never be put into words. It is something of the heart, not of the pen.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-23-04 - Published: 10-23-0424. All Beauty must die reviewsWe were so in love, so good for each other. But then you left me, all alone and I couldn't stand the thought of you with her. I had to do something...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-18-04 - Published: 9-18-0425. When Love and Death Embrace reviewsFalling in love, falling so fast, falling for bliss, fallng to death. PLease R&RLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-18-04 - Published: 9-18-0426. Would you? reviewsWould you do the things I wanted? Would you give what what I needed? Would you love me like I love you?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-3-04 - Published: 9-3-0427. If love was reviewsIf love was a teardrop I would cry forever, If love was a piece of rope we'd always be togetherLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-3-04 - Published: 9-3-0428. The Black Song reviewsLost in darkness, so cold, so alone. Longing for you to find me. And at last I see you...I shining light amongst the black. Your happy tune amongst a song so bitter.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-27-04 - Published: 8-27-0429. Tears of Love reviewsSo much pain in this world, but where does it all come from? It comes from love. If we didn't love we wouldn't hurt. If we didn't smile we wouldn't cry. Plz R&R.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-27-04 - Published: 8-27-0430. Life's Game reviewsLife is just one big game...but will there be a winner? Plz R&R. How many different games can you find? hehe.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 8-20-04 - Published: 8-20-0431. Hurting reviewsNever before has love hurt so much, Never before have I shied from love's touch. You hurt me too! Plz R&RLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-20-04 - Published: 8-20-0432. A Tortured Soul reviewsA soul that feels ravished and torn apart with general depressed feelings of life and love at their worstLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-7-04 - Published: 8-7-0433. Hare Today Gnome Tomorrow reviewsWhat happens when a naughty little hare upsets a nasty old wizard- little poem I wrote when bored. Suitable for young children mainly.Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-7-04 - Published: 8-7-0434. Deathly Cold reviewsThe thoughts and memories a glimpse of a graveyard can bring. How can life become so lost and forgotten?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-18-04 - Published: 7-18-0435. Invisible Windows reviewsBeing so close to someone yet feeling as though you were a million miles away. Like having a pane of glass keeping you apart...being unable to touch, feel or speak to them.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-22-04 - Published: 6-22-0436. Love is a stream reviewsMy love my strongest river/Your love my strongest sea/Our love my deepest ocean/That keeps you next to me plz plz R&RNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-15-04 - Published: 6-15-0437. Raindrops reviewsLoosing someone you held dear can be painful. Especially when you see them in ever other living things. But you know they are there...watching over you. plz plz R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-15-04 - Published: 6-15-0438. What love can do reviewsThe power of a love. The strength it gives you. The way it makes you feel... Like nothing else can hurt youLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-9-04 - Published: 6-9-0439. I need you reviewsWhen your whole body craves just one look from them, just on touch, the sound of their voice. When you need them so much...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-9-04 - Published: 6-9-0440. I'd do anything reviewsThe feeling of total devotion for that special person. That feeling when you would do anythng, anything at all to make sure they are happy and safe.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-1-04 - Published: 6-1-0441. Never Alone reviewsNo matter whether the person you love feels the same or not, that love you have will keep them locked away in your heart forever.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-18-04 - Published: 5-18-0442. God's news reviewsTake a look around. Look at all the pain and suffering people are having to survive in this world. Can there really be a God out there?Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-18-04 - Published: 5-18-0443. The Things You Said reviewsYou promsed me everything, you promised me the world. But all I wanted was your love...and yet you weren't even able to give that.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-1-04 - Published: 5-1-0444. I remember reviewsTo remember every first you have ever spent togetherLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-29-04 - Published: 4-29-0445. Thinking of You reviewsWhen your world revolves around that one you can't forget...when every thought leads back to them.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-29-04 - Published: 4-29-0446. Roses are blue reviewsEverything feels blue when the one you love is no longer by your sideLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-9-04 - Published: 4-9-0447. For you reviewsThe lonely thoughts of a single lover lying awake at nightLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-9-04 - Published: 4-9-0448. Morning's thoughts reviewsWhen the first thoughts of the morning bring a smile to your face.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-28-04 - Published: 3-28-0449. Icy hands reviewsThe grip of a lost love that you never really over came.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-28-04 - Published: 3-28-0450. The People that care reviewsParents. Just a little poem I wrote when I was kind of angry at them.Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-16-04 - Published: 3-16-0451. Emptiness reviewsFeeling alone, feeling as though nobodyknows how you feel. Nobody cares.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-16-04 - Published: 3-16-0452. Empty Corridors reviewsWaiting, alone and in the dark, for that special someone to find you and at last show you the light once more.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-3-04 - Published: 3-3-0453. An End to Love reviewsThe feelings that can hurt so much when a love threatens to come to an end.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-19-04 - Published: 2-19-0454. To sit by you reviewsJust sitting next to someone can give you the most powerful feeling of love. But it can also hurt so much when they don't know how you feel.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-13-04 - Published: 2-13-0455. Blood Red Rose reviewsA dream that threatens to become reality. [This story accompanies one of my poems. Only a one off chapter. Complete.].Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 836 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-7-04 - Published: 2-7-0456. Embrace reviewsHow sweet a hug from your loved one can be...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-7-04 - Published: 2-7-0457. A Strong Love reviewsA love that will last no matter how far you travel from its sourceLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-28-04 - Published: 1-28-0458. War reviewsWhy do we treat others the way we do? Why do we hurt the people we care about? why?War - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-28-04 - Published: 1-28-0459. You reviewsThe pain that death can leave behind as it takes a loved one from you.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 1-20-04 - Published: 1-20-0460. Two friends reviewsHow much does your friendship mean? This is a poem me and a friend wrote during a rather boring History lesson. We wrote a stanza each, staring with me first.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-20-04 - Published: 1-20-0461. Roses are red reviewsWhat happens when a dream turns into reality? (Not sure if this should be under this Genre but it is anyway. This is a poem that makes you think about what is happening so I warn you.)Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-11-04 - Published: 1-11-0462. Did you love me? reviewsLoving somebody so much you can't bear to see them with anybody else. You would do anything to stop them loving another. If they won't love you, they can't love anybody.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-27-03 - Published: 12-27-0363. Trapped reviewsA sould is encaged, never again to love anyone but the one it's heart has chosen. We can't help who we fall in love with...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-18-03 - Published: 12-18-0364. Out of Reach reviewsLoving that special someone...but seeing them with someone else and knowing you won't be the one to take them home tonight.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-10-03 - Published: 12-10-0365. Friendship reviewsA memory lasts forever, never does it die. True friends stay together and never say Goodbye...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 12-2-03 - Published: 12-2-0366. Dream Kiss reviewsDreaming of a kiss from that one true love, yet opening your eyes just one moment to soon... please R&RLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 11-24-03 - Published: 11-24-0367. Blue Eyed Boy reviewsWhen you watch the person you love, love someone else, you can't help but think 'I wish that were me'.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-15-03 - Published: 11-15-0368. Trust reviewsTrust: The most important and most treasured thing you can give to someone you know and care for.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-11-03 - Published: 11-11-0369. Do Not Cry reviewsLife can be tough. Times can be hard. But we must learn to live with them and learn how to cope. No matter how bad we are feeling there will still be good times ahead. Please read.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 11-2-03 - Published: 11-2-03
