Reviews for Live and Die
TheatrePhunk chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
::Is coming up with a tune for that:: Good... You seemed so sad about a year ago! Aww... ::huggles::
lovejoydiver chapter 1 . 4/17/2003
great! that's exactly how i feel! you live to die. keep it up!
R.A. Sears chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
It's good, but maybe you shouldn't try so hard to rhyme. I like the message it conveys, but not all poetry (or even songs) have to rhyme. Good anyway, though. Prolly be better with music to back it up.
Trisha chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
Way cool, I loved it
brittica chapter 1 . 10/9/2002
i truely loved it, write back to me if you have n e comments about n e thing i say
Yeah chapter 1 . 10/8/2002
you try far to hard to rhyme...good...but that's my large critism.
Toadbomb chapter 1 . 10/5/2002
Well done dude. Not bad, not bad at all...