Reviews for Quest for the Angel Tears: Beryl's Story
R.C.Polk chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
Very interesting and well written story. I felt that you could expand a lot more on the character's past, and more about Melphy. Structer it more with more events, pack a lot more into chap one, and your well on your way to glory!

Best of luck,

R.C. Polk