Reviews for noontide
sweetspontaneous chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
so i'm gradually working my way randomly through all of these, because after a while i just don't know what to say. i really really like the last line. this feels like the long green and blue summer afternoons, but its never the green and blue that i remember, because there is gold in the air.
unexpected source chapter 1 . 10/7/2002
so flickering and fuzzy, its yellow and fuzzy, and leaves and soft flitty fuzziness.

It makes you want to have the athsmatic feeling, asthma, you know, when pollen is in your lungs and you long to appreciate what is around and finally you realize it is to accept to pollen to live for the asthma lying in the pollen, flitting about in the yellow fuzziness.

you are like a scene runner, you run through a seen with long quick descriptions and always actions and feelings.

kai
pretty-woman chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
Sorry I forgot to sign in. This is lovely piece of work. Check me out sometime and keep writing!
Rose of Dresden chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
ohhh-

you know how worthless these reviews are? i mean, i love this poem completely, but just typing that out seems to mean nothing.

this is wonderful. i love the ending. i love the whole thing.