oh my goodness, MORE MAI LI? IM GONNA GO CHECK THAT STORY OUT RIGHT NOW!

anyway, you have really progressed as a writer throughout the story, and j kept on enjoying it more and more. even though I didnt enjoy the struggles, I enjoyed the fluffy parts a lot, they were awesome.

sorry for probably driving your email crazy with all of these reviews, sorry for the sometimes violent and weird reciews, and sorry for overusing the words oh my goodness, awesome, and seriously.

but tthank you for posting this story, cause it made my days better, even when my head was killing me from my sinus infection. good stories tend to do that :)

ive been wanting to lock up two of my friends too, cause they couldnt stand each other (and the fact that they are exes doesnt help-BTW, I am the youngest of my grade so they are all 14 and 15...) buuut then the guy said sorry so no need anymore! thank goodness, i had no idea where to lock them up.

i had a huge huge HUGE grin on my face the whole time. this was seriously cute, the recap of everything. totally awesome.

serves her right. and yes, im aware that that is the third time i say it, but Penny really deserves it. I KNEW SHE DRUGGED CHRIS! *does a victory dance*

well, things take a spin for the unusual. her BOYFRIEND was SAD that she WAS NOT PREGNANT? how does that even work? didint he think of getting up in the night cause the baaby's crying, or the costs or anything?

well shit. she messed up big time, even though Marlows a jackass in this chapter...

alright, you get a little bit of love for not making her pregnant. and not being the reason i go to jail the rest of my life. Orange does not suit my skin tone...

Kate's grandma is awesome. i would love to have a grandma like that. one of them passed away last April, she was pretty cool though, and the other is still alive. shes one of those you-need-to-eat-more-you-are-too-thin grandmas... shes awesome :)

if shes pregnant, youre gonna have a problem cause i will hunt down your ass and make you pay for making Kate and Chris go through all this shit.

alright, i get that it was wrong, but he was drugged/drunk... no way denying that, but you cant deny that he kissed Penny... ugh god, youre making me have an internal war with myself!

and the last swear word made me laugh :)

ooh my goodness.. she did not just break up with him cause soon-to-be-anonymously-shipped-to-Siberia-Penny drugged/spiked his drink.. you are sooo not getting any loving from me right now..

she only just realises that he didnt remeber? *frowns* oh well, sometimes you gotta put in things so that the slow-to-catch-up-readers get it... usually im one of those...

well, this definitely isnt the end, when you leave us with a hlaf-cliffie... kinda obvious, dontcha think ? ;p

anywaay, still loving the writing. and I went back and reread all of my reviews, and they are two pages long... its probably gonna be three by the end... whoops

the things you do when youre drunk... well obviously, since Im only 13 (yes, I cuss like a sailor-whoops.) i dont know, but ive heard the dtories. read them, too, and it aint pretty... and niether is this one. now, dont you worry about ruining my 'young little mind', i look older and act older and think older than 13. maybe its the factthat im already 5'11", or 172 centimeters... stupid Dutchie genes..

i really dont love you at all at this point. not one single bit. i told you she shouldve kicked her and get her sent off the team AND send her to Siberia, but NOOOOO, you wanted a'plot line', that is considerately less important than my daily dose of fluff, and right now, I WANT FLUFF AND NOT SOME BACKSTABBING TWAT!

but youre still awesome :)

BTW, i understand it was neccessary for a plot, dont get me wrong. i tend to maybe, ah-overeact when it comes to couples that have lots and LOTS of bumps in a story...