ooh myy goddness. Ben just became a whole lot more awesome. seriously, gay people (well, most of them) are awesome. and the Chris/Kate moment at the end was really sweet!

alright, now that Chris is good and jealous, ben can leave now. like, right away. seriously, otherwise its going to become the really akward retreat...

i loved the 'just divorced' sign, and the 'wrong way' moment at the end. the retreat is either going to be realky good or really awkward... lets hope for really good..

oooooohhhhhh. that was such a self-concious thing of Chris. yes, i am calling him Chris, because Christian is too long to keep on writing. anyway, Chris needs to get his shit straight and realise that Kate (yes-Kate) likes him too and they should kiss and make up and finish the damn project.

but then again, ben sounds really nice... ;)

oh you horrible peraon.

you did not just finish that witha cliffhanger worthy of Rick riordan, King of Trolling.

you should be ashamed ;p

chirstian is jealous, but he needs to man up and tell Katelyn why on earth he walked out on her...

and Christian needs to realise that Jack has gf, and that Katelyn likes him.

sorry for stating the obvious...

oh shoot. they kissed. and it was so sudden.

but now im happy :)

i cannot belive he just didthat...

he did not just go skinny dipping...

but he did.

and tried to kiss herr...

Katelyn needs to get her shit straight and fall in love with him and then they should ride off into the sunset...

sorry. got distracted...

sorry for the overuse of triple dots... and too many alineas...

well that isnt very nice, hitting someone over the head who defended your honor and got suspended for it...

anyway, Markis a total jackass, especially cause Katelyn had a disadvantage with her arm... I hope their egg didnt break in the fight, cause that would be bad. although, its very easy to use another one sothe teacher doesnt notice.

but I cant help but like Christian more and more. most assholes have a sweet guy under many, MANY layers...

ooh myy goodness. i think you made a mistake...

they shouldve named her Eggberta.

i wish we Dutchies did something like this. all we get is to cut open a cow's eye. it was really gross, so i will spare you of the details. trust me, you dont wanna know.

alright, still lovin it, but i just cant keep my eyes open anymore, so its time for me to go to bed. gnight, Aussie person, whoever you might be.

and BTW, I love your version of Masterchef waaaaaay more than the Dutch or English or American one. they (the versions from the other countries) suck, but your accents are awesome :)

sorry for any weird reviews i might send in the future, and this one, but after 10-ish I go into this really weird state and that means i write really weird reviews. sorry about that :/

oohhhh, only a dislocated shoulder (well-only?). i broke my arm once, and it was definitely not nice.

Christian is a world-class jerk, and I seriously think he needs to be taught some respect. but it was at least good he came to say sorry, even though Katelyn didnt beleive it..

oh shit, it makes it kinda hard to be married to the guy that broke your arm...

still loving the story, although the use of goal got me confused if it was American football or English football. damned differences.

this sounds awesome, and it is only the beginning... after all, my new mantra for stories I read is 'foes become kissing buddies' it happens again and again and again and I love it.

You use "..." way too much. It's the one thing that prevents me from having a good read.

one word: GREAT! I love stories like these :D