Well, I am nearly 22 so I don't know if this is for me. I mean high school stories are great but the way you write it seems that you are aiming at high school students. But I'll give it a try.

You have written this story years ago but its still very entertaining and funny and sweet all at once. I love their journey of self discovery and their evolving relationship with that project.

This one goes to my favorites stories.

Oh, wow. She's rather...impulsive. And Christian was right, she blames everyone but herself. I hate when people do that even though I do it, too, but still... I don't know if I like this story yet. I'm waiting for the drama to unravel and what your characters are made of, becuase now, I'm not seeing much depth into them

Oh, that was so sad. Christian is such an ass...

Great first. I see the sarcastic humour coming through. Hope you continue this story well.

loved the ending there, but you made a slip up with names on their date, ""Where do you wanna go?" Jack asked, as he took a hold of my hand." supposed to be mark. and just wondering, why didn't Jack tell her himself instead of telling Marlow? wouldn't she trust jack's words more than marlows?

hey, i'm liking the idea of the story, but i think you should clear up that the game is AFL.

::sigh:: So I was supposed to spend the day writing a speech and making a powerpoint presentation... but I decided to read a story at breakfast... and now it's 7 p.m. and I just finished it. Haha- you're story's so distracting. So good! Thank you! It would be fun to know what would have happened in those couple of chapters if Katelyn's test had been positive... what they would have said to each other... heh. I also think that Australian English is interesting- I thought that your 'football' meant our (American) 'soccer,' like in Europe, but it sounds like our footballs are the same. I also find it interesting that there's something against female sports players- is that normal there? Sorry, off topic. Well, thanks again for the riveting tale! I'll probably check out whatever else you've written now... though I really shouldn't...

Okay. second revieew for this story. Sry.

IT WAS AMAZING!

omg, i cant believe it.

I thought it was so cute how christian was happy like when she told him about the baby thingy and i liked how u handled all of tha.t

I thought it was amazing,

(I like the word amazing)

I spent the last two days reading this story.

Actually i stayed up till four am last night and i just finished it.

I jsut friggin loved it al ]

Okay. I probably shoud finish the story before i review.

But i reaaly wanted to say soemthing.

I'll review at the end of the story, though.

THAT WAS SO CLICHE!

His ex comes back and tries to steal him away from her.

Then the girl walks in on them.

That is completely clichee!

I onder what christian does to make it up to her?

Hm, i should probably finish this now.

Okay. bye.

greatgreat

so i was wondering what sport exactly are they playing... like the rules or something im totally confused.

BTW great job so far

lol, shes a "jock"

it sounds interesting

i don't get it. is this football as in american football or football as in soccer?