What do I think now..?

"where he could have parked his arrogant, over confident behind" - ha! Good ep... (definitely beats this business essay I'm sposed to be doing... bah - Business teacher is too busy with another student to notice no one's working anyway...)

*totters on to read the next bit*

more more write more!

This is turing out to be a great story! i'll be waiting for more updates!:)

Have a nice say!

That was really good, keep going cuz i wanna know what happens next.

rock on,

jen

plse write more, this is one of my fave types of stories.! love it!

Howdy!

Going great so far! Think is playing silly buggers... your story has three chapters, one, prologue, then the third doesn't exist :S lol...

Anyhoo, back to the review - very interesting and can tell it's gonna be a hell of an amusing story:D

*waves*

Hey! Great start - am really interested in finding out what happens next... thanks for the kind words on your page of info thingy... :D

More when you can! And another one of ADR's up... lol...

I love the way you write. I feel like I'm right there with. Without even saying a lot I already feel your emotions. It draws me in and makes me want to keep on reading. I'm really interested in seeing what is happening. (You left me hanging) I can't wait till the next chapter comes out.

Purty good I must say... please write more (and longer pleaz, although I am not one to talk...)

lemme guess by the langauge use- ur an aussie too?

this story sounds wicked, top stuff. i can't wait for more!health class stories always end in giggles... like the time our male teacher had to draw on the board and announced "well,this is my penis, it might look a little wonky to you..."