Reviews for Love Holds Time Still
UnShure Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
The words in this poem are very wonderfully put. Its sad and i can relate, but good job!
KatyGirl1219 chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
::sniffles:: Empathy...(sorry for brevity)

Keep writing!

::hugs::
futagoat02 chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
aw, sweet. nice rhyming... did i spell that right? oh well..

baibaiyukie
MistrissD chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
I love the shortness of each line and how it rhymes so perfectly, it flows so nicely, your so talented, keep it up!
Pandista chapter 1 . 1/13/2003
This is my favorite poem of yours so far. ::Adds to her favorites list:: :o)

Tweek's Panda
22222222 chapter 1 . 12/24/2002
Really beautiful. There's this thing called closure, that most don't offer. Oh well, it lets us write nice angsty poetry. Keep writing!
Mystifying chapter 1 . 12/5/2002
Ah so true! Nice poem to read, especially since I know what that feels like. Anyways about the poem structure itself, I liked the whole beat thing you have going on
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
Very sweet. Keep it
Catgirl Rahen chapter 1 . 10/26/2002
I like it! It's very pretty. Keep writing.

Catgirl
EiDa chapter 1 . 10/10/2002
So nice. Your style is simple yet unique. Keep it up!
VOIDKing Ki chapter 1 . 10/9/2002
This poem touched me because I feel pretty much the same way about someone. I likes the rhyming too. Keep on writing!
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 10/8/2002
wow...this is a great poem! i love it!
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 10/8/2002
Yea that was sweet. You could probably work on a better rhyme for times cuz I dont think that line is working the way it is. Don't take offense its just a suggestion. I did like the meaning of the poem tho. So romantic...
WildMonkeyDanceAroundFire chapter 1 . 10/8/2002
This is beautiful. It's something people can relate too. And it sounds like it comes from the heart. Good job!