Reviews for The Battle
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
Wow! This was awesome work.

~Heart of the Sword
ni-ru chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
O_O Very good stuff...I love it when spoken aloud. It's one of these poems you can't just read into yourself in my view. It truely is fantastic :)
cmetalangel249 chapter 1 . 11/6/2002
OMG I love this poem! It invokes such a vivid picture in my mind...Thats really good! Its like I'm right there looking at each thing...the sea,the sun, the moon, the day, etc etc. Write more, you have talent!
StormyWings chapter 1 . 10/23/2002

I love it! Your SO good at writing poems!

I wish I could be half as good as you are! lol

Thanks for the reviews! :)
hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
wow! this is an awesome poem! you really can be proud of it!

btw thanks for the nice revies! they're really appreciated!
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
I love this poem, Elentari! I particularly like the stanza - "Between the Night and The Day / Between the Dusk and the Dawn / Between the Moon and the Sun / Between the Tide and the Sea." That really got to me. I love your work, keep writing, and come back to visit my stuff soon, too! )