|Reviews for The Battle|
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
Wow! This was awesome work.
~Heart of the Sword
| ni-ru chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
O_O Very good stuff...I love it when spoken aloud. It's one of these poems you can't just read into yourself in my view. It truely is fantastic :)
| cmetalangel249 chapter 1 . 11/6/2002
OMG I love this poem! It invokes such a vivid picture in my mind...Thats really good! Its like I'm right there looking at each thing...the sea,the sun, the moon, the day, etc etc. Write more, you have talent!
| StormyWings chapter 1 . 10/23/2002
I love it! Your SO good at writing poems!
I wish I could be half as good as you are! lol
Thanks for the reviews! :)
| hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
wow! this is an awesome poem! you really can be proud of it!
btw thanks for the nice revies! they're really appreciated!
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
I love this poem, Elentari! I particularly like the stanza - "Between the Night and The Day / Between the Dusk and the Dawn / Between the Moon and the Sun / Between the Tide and the Sea." That really got to me. I love your work, keep writing, and come back to visit my stuff soon, too! )