*takes a tissue* thanks

This was very sad and had some nice imagry

I am sure this has happened before.

I think we talk ourselves into seeing the negatives over the positives

We blind ourselves to the real truth and push away our heroes

Wow. Ok, this was unexpectedly depressing (I read your other poem first).Yeah, wow. That's actually really really sad. I'm speechless.

Wow. I should give that to my friend. She's VERY suicidal. MUCH MUCH more than me. I'm only a little bit, but I think I'm less suicidal after reading this. (not really, just trying to be nice- but it could change a person's attitude- that's how good it is) Great job, keep it up.

~Elena

This is so touching, it almost made me cry. Awesome job.

I read this beforee~! I must have forgot to review. great poem

omg, it was so touching, you're a really great poet! this poem is a great one, and it's true! why owuld anyone want to die? whouldn't we all enjoy life? I WILL definettly put thie poem in my faves! Thanx for writting it, and hopfully, it'll make othe rpeople think twice before they do somehting! _

Aww...very nice, and a good lesson too. I just watched 'Monster's Ball' and although I didn't like it a whole bunch, there's a part in it (just in case you haven't seen it and want to, I'll keep it vague) where Heath Ledger's character makes a moment's decison based on what someone said...and I just kept thinking if he had only thought about it, he might have gone back. But it was too late :( Life is too short as it is to throw it away!

-Blze

I think this is one of my favorite poems of all time. You are truley a great wrter and captured the moment very well. I LOVE IT! and in some weird way i feel it almost connects into my experiences.

ok enough blabbing i'll just stop now but please do write more!

This is wonderful! So incredibly sad. *takes those tissues* It has an incredibly strong lesson to it and has the power to change many minds and hearts. Beautiful. *smile* That's talent.

So sad...*sniff*

Very poignant, very well written.