| Reviews for The Indwelt Ones |
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   Veronica Keeler chapter 1 . 7/10/2006 wow, nicely written and tells a story, i love it |
| Frodo chapter 1 . 12/30/2002 Wow... awesome poem. Love the whole fantasy feel. It's kick bum! You're awesome! -Frodo |
| penfin chapter 1 . 12/30/2002 very mysterious...one of those poems that you read a couple times to see if you missed something that might tell you who "they" are. nice imagery too. |
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 12/19/2002 great poem! i like it! good job. keep writing! and thanks for the birthday wish and the review! |
| Lemon Drop chapter 1 . 12/14/2002 That was really, really pretty. The imagery was great. Ok, so anything I say now sounds stupid because sometimes you don't need words. Nice Job, Lemon Drop |
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 12/11/2002 very pretty, the imagry is beautiful, the poem itself also has a nice flow, nicely done |
| Smiley-Bear chapter 1 . 12/11/2002 Not sure I get your meaning it reminds me of a spirit. For it is unseen. But I must say you did an awesome job putting it together. thanks for your review. Keep writing |
| sMiKe chapter 1 . 12/10/2002 Awsome... Ever play Black&White the pc game? Become a god. Just like the poem. I love it cause im like a huge fan of myths and stuff... so This is good reading! Thanks For Putting that out... which one of these dietys are you like? - Zero Is Nothing |
| Nemariah chapter 1 . 11/23/2002 WOW! I.. that was so beautiful!It's perfect! Goodness! ~Nem~ |
| Elf-Maiden of Mirkwood chapter 1 . 11/19/2002 That was a very beautiful poem, descriptive and lovely! Keep up it up! :) |
| Amakhania chapter 1 . 11/11/2002 Incredable imagery! Really well written! Very whimsical, I think... Well I really liked it! :) Keep writing! Ok? :) And thank you for the review! - Yes, I am that desperatly sad *sigh* :( |
| Blue Peanut too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 11/10/2002 Wow. Anything I could say about this poem would pale in comparison to it. I really like the rhythm you've got here (yay for free verse!) and the imagery...wow...please write more! |
| The Postmodern Prometheus chapter 1 . 11/10/2002 Hmmm... I'm not entirely sure I got it, but I liked it all the same :) |
| Lisa Ann chapter 1 . 11/10/2002 Wow. Nice imagery :-) |
| Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 11/9/2002 Murrrrrrr...this is really good! I like the language you use in this...very descriptive. And THANK YOU FOR SAYING HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME! ::huggles:: You're so nice. _ Thank you for the review, too! Keep writing! ~Namir Swiftpaw |