Reviews for academia
kealohikakahiaka chapter 1 . 12/3/2002
Ummm... I'm searching for something to say about this poem, but there's really not much to be said, except that it's really really really good... and perfect.
Kellza chapter 1 . 11/22/2002
This is an unusually original piece of work. The words puzzlingly weave together a complex and beautiful scene I can't quite understand yet, but I'm going to reread this more than once. Your work is very impressive. I hope that you get it copyrighted, your ideas should not be corrupted.
sweetspontaneous chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
i like this. a twist of the knife, if you'll pardon the cliche
Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 10/16/2002
aw man, this is awesome, this is so cool. this is the best poem iv read in a long time. well a short time because iv been reading poe and lanier and etc, but acht you know what i mean. i love this poem!
unexpected source chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
Reminds me much of chocking, how that word never looks write when you write it.

But not the poem! The adjectives are painful and such juxtaposition! Between daily life an such demur, lablue labut lamur!

aintawoman chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
drowning, and in academia none the less!

I LOVE this:



in adjectives is less painful

than if someone were

to drown among adverbs, double-edged

nouns or worse yet asphyxiation between

an appositive because

the grammar-school demigod was

divorcing his wife-

very very clever. nicely done!

how i love the rain, and the drowning...speaking of, i changed the format to my "color maelstrom."

If you don't mind, please check it out and let me know what you !

Thanks for all of the reviews, they are great, as are you!

good work.