Reviews for Vision
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
cool! i really like it! nice images it creates in my mind! keep writing!
hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
cooles gedicht! die letzte zeile ist besonders gut gelungen, finde ich jedenfalls :)

hab grad dein bio gelesen...hehe. danke. ja ich bemühe mich... :)


Deutschkatz chapter 1 . 10/14/2002
Ahhh, just says you all over _ Now excuse my while I try and translate some others...

Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
Really nice imagery, awesome poem
Kormation chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
Ah, now this is a true mystical writing. I like this. Visions...meditation? It makes me think of Bhuddism and Hinduism, and gods...

The imagery of "blurred eternity" and "silent rhythm" really add to the whole atmosphere. This is what I like to aim for. And why would you need drugs? You have talent.

I can imagine this all happenning, this is the stuff I would love to have occur to a character in something like a manga. Really well done.


Keep with the atmospheric poetry!