Reviews for Guilty Conscience |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Das ist wirklich fantastisch und so tiefsinnig. Eins meiner Favs von dir! Ich kann leider nicht zu allen deinen Gedichten was schreiben, aber ich sags mal hier: SIe sind alle genial! Ich wünschte ich könnte so schreiben! Danke auch für deine reviews, haben mich sehr aufgeheitert! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Written extreamly well with the rhyming making the words ring more truth. This is another perfect poem. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice poem! And thanks for reviewing mine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice poem! i like it! i like the way you capitalized some words (did you do that on purpose?). good job! keep writing! and thanks for the review! the answer to my first riddle is "star". :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very good poem! It rhymes perfectly without losing the point to the poem, something that's kind of rare this day and age. I like it alot. _ and thank you for the review on my own poem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK rhyming- nice flow and rhythm, builds up to the cold and angry ending. I don't know if it was intentional, but making Fear, Pride, Deception etc have capital letters, you sort of personify them and make it very strong and real- shows a fear and paranoia as the guilt gets to you. Fairly accurate depiction of a horrible feeling- weak, almost broken, almost hopeless. Even though the barriers are built, the guilt's still there though- no matter how you think you can forget it or block it, it forces it's way into you. Very strong and sharp. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Indeed. Guilt isn't something you can rationalize away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely brilliant! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That's good! C'est Super! (sorry I'm on a French lang. rush today, heh) Ele. |
![]() ![]() ![]() genial. dass ist einfach super. freu mich schon auf dein nächstes Gedicht Tschau Hope |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, very powerful, i love it, you expressed yourself very well, nice word choice too, nicely done |
![]() ![]() ![]() hay if i wrote that i'd be proud of it to...really cool poem...well done... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh lord, this is AMAZING! You have it word-for-word. I mean..AH! That's all I can say, you are one of the only writers that leaves me speechless. You've done it many times before and I'm sure you will continue to. ~me~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's really weird that I read this today- I was just feeling extremely guilty over nothing at all yesterday. It's a sign! (Don't ask. If you want to ask, I wrote a "poetic essay" thing explaining and posted in on here- read it if you want) This poem was really excellent. The rhymes were true and it was deep. Keep writing! ~* Sunflower, anyone? Please R/R my work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sehr getroffen! Einfach klasse...*applaudiert für den Reim...lol* |