Wow! Das ist wirklich fantastisch und so tiefsinnig. Eins meiner Favs von dir!

Ich kann leider nicht zu allen deinen Gedichten was schreiben, aber ich sags mal hier: SIe sind alle genial! Ich wünschte ich könnte so schreiben!

Danke auch für deine reviews, haben mich sehr aufgeheitert! ;)

Written extreamly well with the rhyming making the words ring more truth. This is another perfect poem. _

Nice poem! And thanks for reviewing mine.

nice poem! i like it! i like the way you capitalized some words (did you do that on purpose?). good job! keep writing! and thanks for the review! the answer to my first riddle is "star". :)

A very good poem! It rhymes perfectly without losing the point to the poem, something that's kind of rare this day and age. I like it alot. _ and thank you for the review on my own poem!

OK rhyming- nice flow and rhythm, builds up to the cold and angry ending.

I don't know if it was intentional, but making Fear, Pride, Deception etc have capital letters, you sort of personify them and make it very strong and real- shows a fear and paranoia as the guilt gets to you.

Fairly accurate depiction of a horrible feeling- weak, almost broken, almost hopeless.

Even though the barriers are built, the guilt's still there though- no matter how you think you can forget it or block it, it forces it's way into you.

Very strong and sharp.

Indeed. Guilt isn't something you can rationalize away.

Absolutely brilliant! Thanks!

Wow! That's good! C'est Super! (sorry I'm on a French lang. rush today, heh)

Ele.

genial. dass ist einfach super. freu mich schon auf dein nächstes Gedicht

Tschau

Hope

wow, very powerful, i love it, you expressed yourself very well, nice word choice too, nicely done

hay if i wrote that i'd be proud of it to...really cool poem...well done...

Oh lord, this is AMAZING! You have it word-for-word. I mean..AH! That's all I can say, you are one of the only writers that leaves me speechless. You've done it many times before and I'm sure you will continue to.

~me~

It's really weird that I read this today- I was just feeling extremely guilty over nothing at all yesterday. It's a sign! (Don't ask. If you want to ask, I wrote a "poetic essay" thing explaining and posted in on here- read it if you want)

This poem was really excellent. The rhymes were true and it was deep. Keep writing!

~* Sunflower, anyone? Please R/R my work!

sehr getroffen! Einfach klasse...*applaudiert für den Reim...lol*