Pretty good... They seem a bit shorter than your other songs (but I may be imagining things, heh) but they're still awesome. I probably liked "Monotonous" the best. Awesome job, definitely keep it up (but what else would I say? hehe) _

~Jess~

Oh, why are you berating yourself? They don't suck at all! They're actually pretty good. Keep writing them. I can't wait to see more.~CT

Yeah, I did like those songs, even if you hate them. They just seemed more natural and flowed a bit better; they didn't seem forced.

Hm... *thinks* These two new songs aren't bad, they just seem like (to me) things that you wrote just because you wanted to write, in some ways. It seems like some of the words and verses you had to force out and it wasn't something that just came to you and you started writing. (did that make sense?) Of course, everything has to be thought about while writing it and such and when you're done to see if it works, but... Eh. Can't figure out how to explain it at the moment. I'll prolly end up telling you later. Anyhoo, I'm just saying this to be honest because I'm your friend and I hate lying to friends. Anyway, still great job, keep writing _

~Jess~

HAHAHA this is the best! HAHAHA

aas i said...i like this better...

love the flow grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl...hehehe ~_

peace,love

-tash

whoa...you are a really truly gifted songwriters...really love the tomboy song...and the others are really great. they aren't lame...you should like be in a band and share em. im sure you could come up with cool tunes..again, really cool songs.-TigerX

P.S. hate that poser Avril Lavigne too...

They're pretty good, again, not your best work. "Through" was pretty good, but the part 'You're the one to stir and I'm to swallow' didn't make a whole lot of sense. Maybe just because I'm being really slow this morning and I'll probably figure it out later, lol. I liked "Pretend". That was a pretty awesome song, heh. Anyway, keep it up! Don't worry, you still got it

-Jessie

I forgot to mention...I like Pretend the best. Is it aite if I use it as an aim away message? ;;;

Hey, you're reallie talented. Ever think of a career in this sort of thing?

Never stop writing!

I really like this song! Very nice! _

Keep up the good work and rock on!

-Mystik or Cait of "The Heartless"

ok, this was better than tomboy

good flow, and i like ur message

im assuming ur a girl

-peace out, yumi

whoa, this would be a pretty long song, huh?

is it a rap? i cant figure it out

its ok, nedds more flow trnsitions between lines that rhyme

keep trying!

-peace out, yumi

omg. u r such a great song writer. some of these r really great, and they would be greater if i could hear the music, but since i cant, then theres no point of complaining i guess. some of these other ones need a little work, but not too many. like i said, u r a really great song writer. WRITE MORE!

Okay, yeah, so i'm reviewing them again but that's just because I'm so nice isn't it? Hehe, I got bored so I was looking at songs and such and was like, "hey, I'll just go review again seeing as she put them all up together (mostly) and put up that new song" heh. I've never actually told you my fave songs, have I? Anyway, just so you know (and so that I can be weird... or something...) they're:

They Say

Average Ends

Lie To Me

Serendipity

Live

Twisted Love

Mr. and Mrs. Right

They are definitely my favourites. Anyway, your new song is okay, not the best of your songs, won't lie to you, but still better than so many other people's 'best' work (go figure) heh. Okay, ttyl, awesome songs -have to say that everytime-

~Jess~

lalala, you already know I love your songs, lol, just leaving a review _ maybe it'll attract more attention (ever notice how people do that? once they see that it has a review, they'll go check it out...) *shrugs* anyway, hehe, still love your songs, ya gonna post the rest of them up here? Oh yeah, and when I was talking to you, forgot to ask if ya've written any new ones. heh, anyway, slightly useless one-sided convo here, lol.

-Jess