Reviews for Segment Stories
Megliz716 chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
i like this story
Sincest chapter 2 . 2/9/2004
very good! write more with the twins! what if she got pregnent! or came back to him for more
chasethemoon4 chapter 2 . 1/8/2004
jasonis such as asshat!
keep writing
Heandre chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
Interesting stories, you write graphic sex well. I am looking forward to a 4th segment if you are still writing them.
me chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Love it. You should do some more bro/sis ones, maybe a shower sequence.
me chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Love it. You should do some more bro/sis ones, maybe a shower sequence.
who knows chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Nic... segment one was the best, you should do anothe on on that.
notgoingtotellyou chapter 3 . 7/7/2003
these are good! write more soon!
Pen Name27 chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
I like these stories, wtire more soon.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
Interesting, you write skillfully, but I feel that the story should take more time in developing itself. Try making your stories a tad longer in the future, there is no point in simply jumping into the 'action', as it defeats the credibility of the situation.
Kenn chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Hey hun! great stories - _~ - Keep on rocking! Woo! Love kenn!
HAA chapter 3 . 2/18/2003
come on and UPDATE! preferably consentual incest.
Jyl chapter 3 . 1/3/2003
This is great...I liked the Second Segment...write more soon...
Guest chapter 3 . 12/21/2002
...when will u write the next segment?
heather chapter 3 . 12/16/2002
i really am enjoying these stories. hope to read a new one soon.
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