Reviews for Segment Stories |
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![]() ![]() Hey, I read the note you put about the more people review the more you will write. The thing is, people are scared to review. Hell, I am to, one of the reasons I didnt sign it. But still, I'm sure that thousands of people read this story. You should post more soon. |
![]() ![]() That was amazing. All of the chapters are. You really need to post more soon. Please...I need it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful...wonderful...love them keep it going...! |
![]() ![]() i liked the twin best, i think you should write more. Keep writting... |
![]() ![]() write more soon! please! i love these stories! |
![]() ![]() Umm...I'm allowed to do segment ideas? Okay, if you're doing lots of incest, you have to do a father/daughter one. Could start with dad trying to spank pre-teen/teen daughter, then...well, you know |
![]() ![]() OMG! i love reading these stories! you REALLY have to put out more segments soon! |
![]() ![]() I might change the second segment...made a mistake in the characters...bleh. Well I'll write a different one. |
![]() ![]() Hey, it was awesome. My suggestion for a segment is twin sister incest. Maybe bondage? I don't know, but your thing was great. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I didn't think it was too long at all. I really love descriptive stories like that. I can't wait to read the next segment. Keep up the great writing. |