hmm this is a great poem i love this one you have earned your way onto my favorite stories section...(which is hard)and more poems like this will get you on my favorite Authors...okay back to the poem i love it exellent word usage a little cloudy but that makes everything more mysterious...this is truly your best work ive read so far...a true piece of Art

I'm no expert, and neither will I pretend to be, but I think this was beautifully expressed.