|Reviews for atlantis|
| teodora chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
Wow. This is just… wow. I can't find words to explain this. It’s beyond beautiful. This is definitely going under my favorites.
| The Depths of Blue chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Lost in thought and dreamy, the poem is mystical and mystifying in its own way. Let your thoughts drift and you can see so much in such a few words, as is the power of language,
-The Depths of Blue
| Written chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
holy -wow-. the end was just. really striking. I can't even properly review this; I'm so taken aback. I love it.
| Loup17 chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
i likes it, yes i do (i'm not actually an idiot) wow, you really know how to write with some impressive stuff. OMG You're actually smart! Oo sorry i just know too many asshole buttface dumbasses. yeah anyways, never stop writing
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
This is such a lovely but short poem, I am amzed by this. You captured so much emotion in this, there is really no particular emotion that can be set in this. I love it. I really do. I am adding this to my favorites lists.
!~* Noelle *~!
| Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
How can it be possible for a poem to be so amazing, beautiful, awe-inspiring? My jaw dropped after I read this. I wish I could tell you how much I love this, but I can't get the words out, so I'll just leave this as it is. Beyond brilliant. Perfect. Favs.
| escape into reality chapter 1 . 3/21/2004
this is amazing, especially the last stanza...the descriptions aren't completely complex, but they mean so much...this is going on my favorites list.
-escape into reality
| Kimjoy85 chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
Omg, I LOVE that ending. I mean, absolutely adore it.
Good things take time. You know what I mean ;)
| Kelpylion chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
such a simple, ethereal poem-I absolutely love the images and ideas here. The lone figure on the shore...her eyes distant, her heart singing a mournful tune, her thoughts of course deep, deep beneath the waves. Beautiful tradgedy.
| curiouzkatt chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
i don't doubt thar it really took you five months to make this one...
it was so sad..
i like it.
| servatis-a-pereculum chapter 1 . 12/21/2003
Wow, I can't doubt that it took 5 months to write, i like it...very sad
| AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
Wow, that was so pretty. It was definitely worth the time. I love the way it's written.
| JolieMaki chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
I like it but why put mathmatic force?thx 4 reviewin mine too
| frugale chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
This is simply stunning! OH MY GOSH! Too beautiful to be reviewed rationally!
| Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
...I wouldn't quite know how to describe it either...you may be a hopeless romantic, but this is nothing short of beauty's true majesty. I used to be a romantic, but I think it has been stabbed far too deep this time to prevail. Anyway, I must definitely read more of your works. If any of them are half as elegant and lovely as this one...