Wow. This is just… wow. I can't find words to explain this. It’s beyond beautiful. This is definitely going under my favorites.

Lost in thought and dreamy, the poem is mystical and mystifying in its own way. Let your thoughts drift and you can see so much in such a few words, as is the power of language,

-The Depths of Blue

holy -wow-. the end was just. really striking. I can't even properly review this; I'm so taken aback. I love it.

i likes it, yes i do (i'm not actually an idiot) wow, you really know how to write with some impressive stuff. OMG You're actually smart! Oo sorry i just know too many asshole buttface dumbasses. yeah anyways, never stop writing

This is such a lovely but short poem, I am amzed by this. You captured so much emotion in this, there is really no particular emotion that can be set in this. I love it. I really do. I am adding this to my favorites lists.

!~* Noelle *~!

How can it be possible for a poem to be so amazing, beautiful, awe-inspiring? My jaw dropped after I read this. I wish I could tell you how much I love this, but I can't get the words out, so I'll just leave this as it is. Beyond brilliant. Perfect. Favs.

this is amazing, especially the last stanza...the descriptions aren't completely complex, but they mean so much...this is going on my favorites list.
-escape into reality

Omg, I LOVE that ending. I mean, absolutely adore it.
Good things take time. You know what I mean ;)

such a simple, ethereal poem-I absolutely love the images and ideas here. The lone figure on the shore...her eyes distant, her heart singing a mournful tune, her thoughts of course deep, deep beneath the waves. Beautiful tradgedy.

i don't doubt thar it really took you five months to make this one...
it was so sad..
i like it.
-curiouzkatt

Wow, I can't doubt that it took 5 months to write, i like it...very sad

Wow, that was so pretty. It was definitely worth the time. I love the way it's written.

I like it but why put mathmatic force?thx 4 reviewin mine too

This is simply stunning! OH MY GOSH! Too beautiful to be reviewed rationally!

...I wouldn't quite know how to describe it either...you may be a hopeless romantic, but this is nothing short of beauty's true majesty. I used to be a romantic, but I think it has been stabbed far too deep this time to prevail. Anyway, I must definitely read more of your works. If any of them are half as elegant and lovely as this one...