Reviews for While you sleep
Aubrey chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
I did a random search and chose your story on a whim. I really could relate to the text and the style, and the emotions felt genuine. I sincerely cannot find anything outstandingly incorrect about this piece. Thanks for the read.
BlueRyu chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
OMG I love this so far, I can't wait to read the rest. I relate to it a whole freakin' bunch, I did the exact same thing thinking the same things except it was at her house. Is this a true story?
Tiger-Whiskers chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
awz, it's so sweet! You have a true talent for writing romance, keep it up :)
CarthakGoddess chapter 1 . 4/17/2003
This is a lovely story. I like the way it flows and it's well-written. My only complaint (grammar freak that I am) is that you don't do possessives correctly. For instance:

"Jacobs hard-on"

Should be, "Jacob's hard-on."

Not a big thing, but an import thing. Aside from that, the story was beautiful.
Just Wolf chapter 1 . 4/4/2003
that TotaLLY ROCKED. It was fucking brilliant. So sweet, so perfect, so sad...
Gauy chapter 1 . 4/1/2003
The end of this story sorta reminds me of two people I know.
SicksisterSam chapter 1 . 3/22/2003
Awesome keep writing I love it. Does it refer to any petrsonal experiences? Kinda hits close to the makr for me. Keep writing please! Laters!

~Sammy

PLUR
lamiapiratess chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
I really liked this story, are you going to write any more? Keep up the good work!
miss emtoo chapter 1 . 10/15/2002
Wow. This was really good. So honest, so brutally pure... So open. Exellent set-up.
heidi chapter 1 . 10/15/2002
thats beautiful. its so well written, i was almost there, and amusing too... what else have you written, i want to read it!