Reviews for lockean
Kirney Slate chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
well, the composite of "politic-economic-societal" imagery combined with the usual witty natural descritions make for another great poem by you. You could've stuck to Locke more, but the descriptive tangents are beautiful and nice. I just, at the end, felt a little overwhelmed, like you were stuffing almost too much of a good thing into this poem. But it didn't really diminish much at all from the poem.

In fact, I wrote one about locke after reading this, I liked it so much.

-kirney
Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 10/16/2002
i love it, this is great. i love locke and montesquieu and , ah formaldehyde eyes! it would be worthles to say, per se, keep writing, because i know you will; and i would not accomplish much to voice, You are grand, thy poetry is grand and great, and locke is grand and i love your poetry, because this you already know. but i do

lorraine
Jade chapter 1 . 10/16/2002
Wow... what can I say... your poetry is so deep, advanced and the formating is always so original and your ideas so powerful yet simple for the most part so we can relate to them... brilliant.

Take Care

Jade