Haunting, you should try writing a novel, i bet it would be really good, i think that there's a lot of ways this story can be developed into something longer.

Deep, conveys feeling really well. I like the part about her old friends saying hi especially. Very good.

I'M KINDA LOST BUT IT'S ALL GOOD RIGHT? ANYWAYS IT'S GOOD FROM WHAT I CAN UNDERSTAND BUT I'M NOT REALLY "IN" IT TODAY SO

-LATER

Woah... that was really intense!

I like.

OMG! this is really great!:) kinda sad(depressing) but really good!

Hey, thanks for reviewing my story, so I'm here to return the favour, is it me or do we think the same lol. People are always asking me if I'm suicidal, but seriously, i'm not. Your grammar is a bit inconsitent, but otherwise you got talent, and good handling of the thoughts, your dialogue is good too. I can't really write good dialogue, which is why i normally use rambling of thoughts, this review is turning out longer than expected, oh well, thanks again for reviewing, go read me poems ya?

OMG lav...that was so...sad.

now for the criticism...-lol-

hmmm...there's nothing to say!

It was really good...really morbid...but REALLY good.

-applauds-

i really like it