Reviews for Rain
OJW chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
I liked this a lot! it was very beautiful.
A Perfect Sonnet chapter 1 . 3/20/2003
I love the concept of this story, well written. I hope you got a good grade, I think you deserved it. The description is good and I liked the style. The only thing that bothered me just a little bit was that there weren't spaces between sentences. Otherwise I really liked it :D
Moonwinges chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
Even your stories are like beautiful poems. The imagery and message in this are great; I really like it.
PaNda-BeaR chapter 1 . 12/22/2002

hehehe... it has a lot of imagery and its all pretty sounding

ne? kaosu-chan?


luV becky
treklet chapter 1 . 10/16/2002
nice job, but the use of the word silver is a little repetitive.