|Reviews for laurier|
| Tethys-Orion chapter 1 . 12/31/2002
Your style reminds me very much of Milton's. That is a rare thing, in this day and age. This piece is splendidly written. I hope you realize it.
-"lost among forests of black ink
clovers cling like gold dust
to the medieval turnings of an ancient clef," . . . these words are turned so beautifully that they create a picture in color as well as in sound.
The last line seems . . . almost out of place to the sheer ancientness and serenity and wonder of the rest of the piece. I wonder why it is placed there so.
at any rate, a great poem indeed.
| Odin1 chapter 1 . 11/26/2002
Wow. You are a gifted poet. This poem is simply amazing. Your word choice is great. It wraps you up and pulls you along with the flow. Great! Amazing work.
| account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 10/17/2002
so romantically dark and perfect 19th century darkly transcendental-
this is your usual lovely work, and i hope you know how much i love your poetry