Reviews for WordPlay
Verbal Essence chapter 2 . 9/21/2004
heh, reminds me of Linkin Park
flow gets a bit uneven near the middle of the second verse
the message gets through in a direct manner, but I'd still suggest using a more metaphorical based approach
overall, it's a bit short but it's not bad
Rhyno Holter chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
Holy crap, thats a good rap/song/thing. I agree with Funky Munky, get Eminem to sing it and put it to music, then we can be happy and die peacefully... ."
Ok, good rap. Do more!
Joella chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
Yay Meg! Lol, like I didn't get it the first four lines, but when I read "like you did back then when we were friends" that was like wow. (for lack of better description) That was a cool line. (lines) Anyhoo, pretty cool rap/song thing w/e. (o:
Verbal Essence chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
awesome song
i managed to make up my own music to this song
Limp Bizkit's Eat You Alive actually went with this song quite well
Funky Munky chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Very good! I like it a lot and would rally like to hear it put to music.
Chell-o Bodello chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
You write music so well! Unlike me ...

Shell25 chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
kool song/rap...maybe i'll just stick to poem. kool poem. ;) i like ;)

well, pz out

It all fades away chapter 2 . 5/19/2003
These sngs rock! I don't find many enjoyable songs to read so these were definetely worth reading. I applaude your talent. By the way, I'm sorry I havn't reviewed sooner. The site never E-mailed me the review so I didn't know I had it.
Yumi chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
no, im not a fan of rap, tho i am a fan of ur style if u can having fun looking at ur songs and ignoring the world

-peace out and rock on, yumi

P.S: my AIM sn's: vertigo8MI, earthbound4287...i wont talk 2 u unless u talk 2 me(let me know it is u, random people bother me)