how sad. Very powerful though. You write some good stuff. keep up the good work!

oh i can relate to this really i can this is so depressing but it is so very good

Whoa!

Interesting... pretty neat. I am of the liking-muchly of it.

And I warned you not to read "Yami". I don't like it at all anymore.

Your poem is much better.

i could relate to this though in a different way, good job but.

This is a very good poem, and it's got strong feelings...

It's also so sad... don't worry, someday you'll find someone special and then you'll have someone to care about you. :)