this is a little gem.

it's simple and sweet, and well-written too.

andrew's moment of revelation was just... wow :)

the backstory had me intruigued and from then on i was smiling until the very end - apart from the moments i was frustrated with andrew.

but at least he finally remembered.

i can't believe you wrote this six years ago! has it really been that long since 2002?

anyway, i think that this is a lovely, incredibly touching story... and i'm actually still smiling!

aw :) great story!

I loved this. It reminded me so much of how me and my best friend started out. Ironically, we've known each other for three years too, but we've spent them together. He was so shy and sarcastic and I was... well... just this crazy person :P Now he's like Andy. Sexy,lots of friends, popular with with ladies and a talented musician and I'm nuts about him. Now if only he'd return the feelings. *sigh*

Keep up the good work. ~Mockingbird

Beautiful, touching and sweet. Characters are very realistic. Post another story?

Sweet! I think it was a great idea of yours to include the youth group. Most people try to steer clear of religious issues, but I'm really glad you included it. I don't know if the activities that happened in the youth group are actually what happens in your youth group (presuming that it's based on your own experiences), but I can relate to it, but at my youth group, we have Bible Study instead. Anyhow, it's great to have found an author who's willingly included a religion and involved religious issues!

this is an amazing, wonderfully written and very... compelling? story - its awesome, seriously, with the plotline, and the way its written - i couldnt stop reading!
you definitely should have a LOT more reviews! maybe yu should resubmit this as a few chapters (well you definitely should heh) and rename it and give it a different summary because it really needs to be better publicised - to do it justice! this was a very very wellwritten (in a string-together-words way and a string-together-whole-ideas/sentences way), beautiful :)

Beautiful
Poignantly tantalising
nostalgically touching
AWESOME AS HELL!
I love this story !
*omgness omgness, gasping at the brilliance of the story*...
ITS SO GREAT!
is it true?
IS it real?

that was really, really good! i really liked it! i smiled for half of it, god, it was so cool. i liked all the flashbacks, the memories of the camp, i wish that it wasnt the end! you know, you could actually continue this, even though it may completely stuff it up.. hmm, i don't know. but it was great, i love your writing style! rosie x

WOWWWWWWWWW! This story is amazing! I love it! _

Hey, that was really awesome. You need to write a sequel.

The end! The end! You aren't going to let us know how their relationship develops?

VERY good story. But I was sad that it had to end. You should write a sequel about their life from this point on. Loved it tho. :)

I loved this story. The emotions seem very real. Very nice work.