Great job! This is excellent!

Fine, I won't use the ninja Monkeys, but if you don't hurry up, all I have to say is a simple command... *grins evilly*

*sings queitly to herself in padded room*

"the itsy bitsy spider, went up the wall again. Down came the rain and washed the spider out..."

COME ON GIRL! I'm bored here! You gotta update this thing, and like NOW! I'm going crazy here! *folorn sniff*

Ok, i know it's summer and you might not have had time, but come on! puh-lease update soon. This is too good of a story to have it disappear down the drain.

"...down came the rain and washed the spider out..."

I don't even know if I'm getting the words right to that song and it's just wrong!

My only cure is a chapter five coming out soon.

Please?

*innocent puppy dog look*

Cat

Oh thiis is a great story, you really must continue! I'll keep my eye on this. BTW - !hank's for reviewing my story!

Yay! *does happy dance for about 5 minutes then realizes she doesn't know how to dance and trips over the dog*

ok, bad idea, but you get the gist. You updated! which was of course, fab-u-lous!

I love it and now you've got me running through have a dozen co-updates to this...ideas that could happen but most definetly WON"T...so I'm afriad there is only one cure before I waste away in madness. You must update and soon!

*sweeps into not-so-graceful bow and leaves even less gracefully*

Cat

This is excellent! I really like how you have come along with this. This is cool! Please continue, or else I'll sic the evil Ninja Monkeys from Uranus on you!

And thankies for reviewing my story! _

Update...SOON! I'm ordering you now. I updated my stuff. (this is Catalina..I'm signed into my other account because it won't let review twice)

Please Update soon! I'm dying here...

Cat

This is a really good story, not the most unique thing in the world, but good. Why did you stop writing?

Alex

Woah...WOAH WOAH WAOH! This is absoulutly amazing! This is probably one of the best stories I've ever found on fanfiction/fictionpress...You absoulutly possitievly HAVE to update soon...You have to! and you yelled at me for leaving you haning...geez...*goes down on hands and knees* please please Update! !

Ok, enough of that. As you can hopefully tell, I LOVE your story. It's absoulty Superb! Incredible, Fab-u-lous! sorry..I'm on caffine. I just gave your story link to one of my other friends on here, so unless her brain cells aren't working, you'll have another fan...this is incredible! Upadate soon puh-lease!

Ok, I'm done with that...there were a couple of errors I noticed when I was reading...It was in the first chapter...there's only one, sorry, i was wrong...but in the first chapter when Em is talking to Miss Whatever-her-name-was teacher person...umm...you worded you're sentence weird...let's see...ugh...I gotta go look it up...

Here. Miss Phelps said, "Are you sure the glandular fecer isn't coming back, is it?" YOu either need cut out the first three words, or the last two words, because it doesn't make sense...read it out loud and you'd see what I mean.

I gotta go...I have to go review other people who reviewed my story..unfortunalty...they don't have as good stories as this one...UPDATE SOON PLEASE! for my sanity, if nothing else.

byeness!

Cat