|Reviews for hairy chin|
| Kelpylion chapter 1 . 6/26/2003
You've really said something here, in a new and interesting way-excellent piece.
| wingless chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
this is really good. i liek how the smiles are described as having watts. its an interesting message and powerful at getting it across
| broken wings241 chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
Hmmm, I agree and I don't agree. The streets are the streets and always have been... maybe, maybe not. Times change, but people don't... maybe, maybe not. I don't know a whole lot, but I do know that I can't say a whole lot about "normal" teenagers today, I'm not one. And I certainly don't know about normality 20 years ago. So maybe the streets are always the streets, maybe they do change.
| alex4 chapter 1 . 1/23/2003
grim and poignant
| Spanish Amor chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
beautifully written and very true!
i like it!
| mystic words chapter 1 . 11/5/2002
great poem, i love the wording and the imagery...it does make me, a young person, think twice of the old. Never stop writing...your good
| Hibiscus chapter 1 . 10/30/2002
Excellent, raw visuals. Very real. Wonderful use of "la-dy" and "hair-y" to bring home the age difference. Or is it age? Keep writing!
| Kephnos-Anagennao chapter 1 . 10/25/2002
rather vivid imagery, nice use of public symbolism. reminds me of an e. e. cummings poem, "old man sticks".