Reviews for Mystery Marriage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It was really cute. I love it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, like this one too, I wanna beta-read this one next! :) lol Middi~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome! Great story! finished it all in one day! Liz |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Quite touching, I can see why this one was so popular _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, that was sweet... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyable story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaw it doesn't have a sequel o wellz ima still add it to my favorite stories list! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i loved it! this has a sequel don't it? ima read that too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() didn't you say she was five foot eight in the last chapter? and that's good you fixed the format! it's easier to read.. but you should fix your paragraphs their too long! haha try cutting them up into two or three sometimes when they get too long! cause it makes us the readers kinda too lazy to read it so then we just skim through it and sometimes we miss the good parts! oh and the woman who scheduled it is her mother! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg hey you need to change the format of this.. it's too hard to read.. but you guys call the little place where you put your stuff of the car a boot? we call the trunk here in america man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story though i think Garth's fate should have involved him getting executed in the worst possible way for what he did as well as any of her mother's ex boyfriends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved that story. It was so sweet and filled with anticipation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw yay! they're happy. lol, funny way to get together but her mum is smart for doing that. lol, everyone's happy, cya later ~ Alenor. |