| Reviews for Teamwork |
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   Arsenal Always chapter 10 . 11/30/2002 Good, but how can they be so calm in a Nazi prison cell? I thin you made it sound like the two of tehm were stuc in jail for speeding! You need to exagerate the situation more. Great story though! ~Blue Eyes~ |
| Melilot Gamgee-Took of Bywater chapter 10 . 11/29/2002 This is a really good story! Please continue soon! |
| Concetta chapter 8 . 11/20/2002 Sweetness! This scene reminds me a bit of my nieces! I can relate. I've got four nieces! Plus three nephews! I love this story! I'm also a MAJOR "Star Wars" fan! I adore Han and Leia's romance, it's so cute! And I thought it was clever how you modeled your character's romance after theirs. One note, though, Barbie dolls were not created until the 1950's and Skipper was not created until the 1960's. So, instead Barbie dolls, they could be playing with paper dolls or a "Mary Jane" doll or a baby doll . . that's all, 'kay, Ciao! :) |
| Concetta chapter 1 . 11/10/2002 UPDATE SOON! |
| mystlady390 chapter 7 . 11/7/2002 I'm so sorry for not reviewing so soon. I'm cutting back my internet hours now. -_- You should find yourself a publisher and get this wonderful story out to the world.. I like this alot. |
| Blue Eyes chapter 7 . 11/7/2002 THIS IS GREAT! |
| Concetta chapter 7 . 11/6/2002 THANKS! Glad to be of service! This is a cute chapter! Please continue soon! I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| NMChist chapter 7 . 11/6/2002 Okay, okay, since you practically begged. . .I have been a silent reader for a while now. I do enjoy the story and the witty reparte (did I spell that right?) between Lil and Mike. I also really appreciated your beginning where you discussed the historical background for your piece - in my opinion, that is not done often enough in this category. You seem to have a good handle on the background. Keep up the good work! nmc |
| Concetta chapter 1 . 11/5/2002 PLEASE CONTINUE! I'M DYING TO READ MORE! |
| Concetta chapter 6 . 11/2/2002 OOO! WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT? SWEETNESS! I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! |
| Concetta chapter 5 . 11/1/2002 I LOVE THIS STORY! It is so cleverly written and very well developed and extremly funny and poignant at the same time! I love it when Mike says: "'If I let you come it wouldn't be because I changed my mind; it would be because I lost it!'" Hysterical! Mike's my favorite character! |
| quinn chapter 5 . 10/28/2002 awwwwww! love it! write more soon |
| mystlady390 chapter 5 . 10/28/2002 That was ssssssssooo sweet. Update soon |
| Vikki chapter 5 . 10/27/2002 I absolutely love your story. It's so well written and original. It's superior to alot fo romances floating around here. Don't leave us in suspense. Keep writing. |
| stina chapter 4 . 10/26/2002 wow, good story... i like it a lot... write more |