Reviews for Cutting Edge |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *stares at screen gawking* Wow. Just wow. That is so awesome. *clicks 'Add story to favorites'* ~paperclip (that's my nickname, don't ask) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome poem! *clicks favorites* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gods! That is awesome! Never, never, never stop writing! I felt like that so many times I can't remember when I first felt like that! Sometime last year... |
![]() ![]() Too lazy to sign in. But this poem is... *aghast* ... so emotionally powerful, it's... unbelievable. *Talent Sucking Orb is wielded* |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cannot saying anything because she's crying too hard* |
![]() ![]() ![]() simply amazing. the pure embodiment of what i suffer through every day. i am speechless. incredible... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is EXCELLENT. it's like, perfectly written. The sad thig is i can really reallt relate to this. keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you know you have "And so I shun then" written instead of "And so I shun them"? You should fix that. The mistake kinda ruins the effect. This is definitely going on my favorites list. I liked this poem a lot. It's dark and very, very deep. Great job! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this poem. It's possibly my favorite poem ever written by someone on this site. Beautifully written and captures feelings so well. The bloodied tears of a dove I just can't get over that line. I love it so much. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm. not exactly to my taste, but good nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() Hey! This was a really good poem. I wrote a poem about suicide as well, its called Sometimes. I plan on posting it but I'm not sure if I should. Less than 2 months ago I was going to commit suicide. I had my reasons. Lucky for me, my friend stopped me before I could go through with it. Anyway this is a great poem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am not an anguished teen, but at this moment in time, I can certainly relate. Well written and good imagery. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. For all of us suicidal depressed teenagers right? You hit it dead on. It's not morbid or too angst-ridden, it's just an explanation. I really like that kind of writing, wish I could do it as well as you. I think it was quite beautiful, the way you interworked everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazingly done. I really like it. |