Reviews for Artificial |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this poem...the short lines make it more intense and give it a drum-like beat. Very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have to agree with everyone else that poem is neat. don't stop writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I don't know what to say - it's incredible, touching, stunning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you don't stop writing poetry you have a way to convey things of truth into unforgettable poems. On to read the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohhhhh this is so very good! The last two lines are a very good way to end the poem. Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still chewing on it; the subject matter is perfectly understandable, but to to convey how or what is a bit beyond me *sheepish grin*. To say it's good is trite. It's sublime. DO NOT STOP WRITING ;) |