Reviews for Artificial
Brinneh chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
I really like this poem...the short lines make it more intense and give it a drum-like beat. Very nice.
nacay chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
i have to agree with everyone else that poem is neat. don't stop writing!
translucence chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
Wow. I don't know what to say - it's incredible, touching, stunning.
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
I hope you don't stop writing poetry you have a way to convey things of truth into unforgettable poems. On to read the rest.
Miss Kissranada chapter 1 . 11/7/2002
ohhhhh this is so very good!

The last two lines are a very good way to end the poem. Love it!
Aathiya Lia chapter 1 . 10/26/2002
I'm still chewing on it; the subject matter is perfectly understandable, but to to convey how or what is a bit beyond me *sheepish grin*. To say it's good is trite. It's sublime. DO NOT STOP WRITING ;)