Wow, I really like the symbolism (spell?)That you used, I think it was a really pretty poem.

The repeatition of the theme really drove your point home!

very descriptive... i hope you are feeling better

and you wrote:

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I believe no antidote can cure my pain

But me, myself, can

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Yeah that is true but sometimes you need help to cure your pain, like true friends, your family, and anyone who had given you unconditional love in your life! No matter how depressing things get, remember that it is a temporary feeling ... neways, i just wanted to comment on your poem.