Wow, I love this poem...it is awesome...however, I now will have to hate you for how well you write...wow.

This has the tone of autumn in it, w/the colors, the cool temperature, and the feel in the air.

I don't understand the ending completely, but wow. I really love how it begins, and everything.

But these poems that you write, they could seriously depress me because they are so good, but keep writing.

Wow.

"Warmed here in her blanket of moss and copper, / Upon mounds of gold I lie safely in flame." Best two lines in the whole poem. And this is one amazing piece of poetry. Actually, I've never seen anything quite like it (and I mean that in a good way.) This is going on my favorites list. And I really hope you try to get this published. It should be admired by the masses. Seriously.

Wow, mi pajarita. Brilliant, of course. I love fall, too, and I like the personification of 'her'. *grin* you have to much talent for your own good. I think one day you will implode, then explode, then implode again with it.

Well? What have I left to say? Many things. Meese. Glorious, love. I don't get it at all. My computer just made a rude noise, so I think I'll see what it's up to you. Oc tremi ec. ~~moouse~~