Reviews for Demonic Angel's Dream
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Aw so sweet. Well written too. Definatley keep writing!
Prince Celestin chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
Beautiful! It depicts exactly how even tough hearts can be softened. Good job!
SoulSister chapter 6 . 12/18/2004
these are really beautiful poems. you have a way with words.
BeccaBoo14 chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
awa,so cute, and appreciative :-)
i like it lots :-)
Yakul chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
::cries:: That is so beautiful. I feel like I am that demon waking to find my brown eyed angel.
TheSoundOfSilence chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
8-0! ::stunned speachless::
Wesley Hendrix chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
Wow. These poems are awesome I love them. I chose to read them because I got a simliar set of poems on my account check them out I would like to know your oppion on them.
star fish4 chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
oh man! this poem is...i don't know! it was an awsome idea and the wording is excellent! i couldn't have written it in any better way. great job!
Angele Raye chapter 6 . 6/4/2003
This whole poem touched me quite a bit. It was well written. However the third part didn't seem to carry the same emotion as the rest. I felt like it brought the rest of the piece down. I would like to compliment you on your work. Best Wishes! :-)
ShorelineWind chapter 6 . 6/4/2003
That was a strange ending, but nevertheless facinated. Good job! That was an interesting poem and I hope to read more of your narrative poems soon. :)

Anyway, keep writing.
ShorelineWind chapter 5 . 6/4/2003
I like your language in this piece. It was different from what you've written so far and came out beautifully.
ShorelineWind chapter 4 . 6/4/2003
This poem really stands out from the series and it's more than the narrative poetry. Keep up the good work!
ShorelineWind chapter 3 . 6/4/2003
ShorelineWind chapter 2 . 6/4/2003
Awsome! I'm going to keep reading now. Really, I've never been more facinated with narrative poetry...
ShorelineWind chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
Amazing narrative poetry... I've never read such a good one so far. It flows nicely and the images are incredible. I can feel the emotions... That was lovely...

Keep writing. Great job.
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