Reviews for Golden Pawn
lauren chapter 5 . 12/15/2002
hey u got some potential. ur doing fine.
elle ravenstarr chapter 5 . 10/27/2002
k, that was kinda confusing, but what i understood was brilliant, no, im kiding, I loved this, i look forwrd to more of ur stuff sooooooooon


ChickenRun chapter 2 . 10/24/2002
I like the story but only got this far as it is incredibly hard to read. Can you please Paragraph your work? Otherwise it is quite neat. Keep giong but please reformat- replace