|Reviews for Stolen Life|
| Cobra Split chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
So angsty. The glass *is* half full sometimes :) I won't lecture you - lectures always fall on deaf ears.
There's not much to edit interms of free-form poetry. However - Only one line in the poem was misplaced. Whether or not this was intentional doesn't matter. You could use a e.e. Cummings (check him out - he's pretty happy, but the way his poems are physically written will give you an idea of what I mean) approach and use line misplacement to illustrate your poem further.
Also - if you want a high dose of anger, you should listen to Garbage sometime. I think you'd find that you have a lot in common with the lead signer.
| Lina Inverse chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
| Gir Garcia chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
wow...i like this a lot. so deep...so...wow!
| Rivalita Undone chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
I really love this poem! It's more mature than some of your earlier work. Really great, and sad.
| nimue webweaver chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
BRILLIANT!i loved it. good job good job and very sad.
| De Miles Justus chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
"We shall find each other. In this world or the next."
Ironic, considering what's happening overseas.
| Crystalis Inlance chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
wow..that was really nice, Goth-girl. keep on writtin'! i loved it actually. i cant really write like that. i write so predictable it makes me sick
| Isilame chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
yes sad but not very tragec