Reviews for Heart Of The Dragon
Tesla's Hand chapter 9 . 5/3/2003
Very Interesting story. My one problem with it was that I think it was a little short. Write more stories!
nightsword04 chapter 9 . 4/6/2003
Hi- this is JL

I read through the whole story... it was great, your description has certainly gotten a lot better. I especially think the wording of the epilogue is beautiful, from an aesthetic viewpoint... yes, I have an obsession with style. The actual story flows well, although there are still a few places where events seem to occur too suddenly and illogically.
siond chapter 9 . 12/21/2002
very good. i liked it very much. just read the intro to you sequel(dont know if i wrote in it- but it is good too).

siond chapter 9 . 12/21/2002
very good. i liked it very much. just read the intro to you sequel(dont know if i wrote in it- but it is good too).

nightdragon0 chapter 9 . 12/19/2002
A nice ending. I enjoyed this story a lot!

With all the riddles and all too.
Suthaze chapter 5 . 12/16/2002
Another great chapter. The thing in the last chapter that might have thrown people for a loop was Martha appearing out of nowhere. If the Huntress does that by magic, how would Martha do that? Its funny that everyone seems to be in on this 'Song is the savior' thing.
Suthaze chapter 4 . 12/16/2002
It was great but the first time you introduce Windwing, that whole paragraph, you have to admit that is pretty convienent.
Suthaze chapter 3 . 12/16/2002
The riddle is a little obvious, but that's because the reader knows that it will have something to do with dragons. If I were the main character, who doesn;t know about the dragons, I would be seriously freaked.
Suthaze chapter 2 . 12/16/2002
A mysterious girl that put claw marks in metal, or whatever Jerold was wearing for armor, and almost killed a dog with one blow might put some people off ease, but not these people. . . again, great chapter but you should consider these things.
Suthaze chapter 1 . 12/16/2002
That was very cool. It does seem a little weird that Rubyflame would use a last resort spell before the battle even started. Another queston is: where exactly was the girl? If she was at the back of the lair, Rubyflame didn't do a very good job of defending. I know, I know, your setting up cool characters with a history but youmight want to think about those things.
Araceil chapter 9 . 12/15/2002
ohh please do a sequal pleaaase!

-pout- ill cry and scream and stamp my foot though fucking lot thats gonna do
Amber Evans Potter chapter 9 . 12/14/2002
. Very sweet. I really loved this story and I want to thank you for writing it. I thought it was very beautifully written.
Amber Evans Potter chapter 8 . 12/7/2002
That was AWESOME! Please continue with it soon! I absolutely loved it! I can't wait to see how this ends, it was so good! .
nightdragon0 chapter 8 . 12/7/2002
I expected she'd have a little more reaction to her ture dragon form, but the story's great anyway!
Araceil chapter 8 . 12/7/2002
... gurl i dunno what to say this is the best thing i have ever read keep it up pleeeease i cannot say enough times
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