Reviews for Let Me Breathe
all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
The summary was great - it really drew me in. The actual poem, however, seemed really cliche.

"You've left me alone..." "No reason to live..." Those are all really, for lack of a better word, cliche. It would've been better if you used those but elaborated more in a unique way. When you just leave it like that, it's too... bland.
Sonata IX chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
You're right, angst poems are definitely your specialty..and you're very very good at them.
Angel Nazi chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
sometimes i feel like that, like you just need to breathe ya loved the pome!

Angel Nazi
It all fades away chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
That wa sad, but a a good poem nonetheless.
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 11/6/2002
My favorite thus far. I know this feeling too. Great stuff, keep on writing.~CT
FiberglassButterfly chapter 1 . 11/5/2002
I love you how you go from asking the person to let you breathe, to saying you don't want to breathe because they aren't coming back...Awesome!
Pardalis chapter 1 . 11/4/2002
Oh, ouch.. Thankfully, I can only relate in the sense that I nearly lost the person who is the sole reason for my existence. I particularily like the last stanza.
lighted eagle chapter 1 . 11/2/2002
i can so totally relate to this poem it's not funny...i especially like the way you ended it, i felt that was nicely done...
the cute lil dead girl chapter 1 . 10/25/2002
I love this poem!

I just do...

Are you missing someone-did someone leave u!

I kinnda noticed that in most of ur poems u write aboute someone who left u...

By the way... I have a think for !

u know...I can't help u...Keep up the good work!