Reviews for Learning to Fly on Broken Wings
aPPle-FrrEAk chapter 1 . 1/31/2003
I think this poem is great! It shows the real ups-and-downs of life.
GoggleHead17 chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
That was good. I really like ur poetry.

GoggleHead17
Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 10/25/2002
Interesting poem, I like it. nice use of sounds (*hits self over the head for lack of ability to remember the word*) and nice imagery. Great job

-Jessie
The Biggest Dreamer chapter 1 . 10/25/2002
It's not really that depressing, it actually holds a good message. It's amazing how

you can just write this. You are talented.

I wish I could write poetry...