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![]() ![]() ![]() oh, lovely portrait. the contradictory metaphors were lovely. simple but beautiful wording. one of my favorites of yours. great rhythm and stunning imagery. keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, you're a lot of things aincha :P I loved the line about being "the little things/That make you whole" Nice addition to the poem. |