Reviews for I
xo0Jayne0ox chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
Didn't like it
star65 chapter 1 . 11/1/2002
oh, lovely portrait. the contradictory metaphors were lovely. simple but beautiful wording. one of my favorites of yours. great rhythm and stunning imagery. keep it up!
miss emtoo chapter 1 . 10/26/2002
Well, you're a lot of things aincha :P

I loved the line about being "the little things/That make you whole" Nice addition to the poem.