Reviews for Voice Of Heaven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Didn't like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very very real piece. I had shivers up and down my arms (how random?) while reading it. I was going to sugget you do more stuff with the last note, but then I got to the end and poof! Just knock me down dead, huh? No, I'm just kidding. If you didn't realize it. I really like how you described the singer in such detail, it was as if she were the music, that we were seeing the music, not the music-maker. I also like your descriptive language- I don't mean adjectives persay, but, for example, 'cascade'. You have definately captured music on paper. Bravo! I recommend, to fellow readers,reading it aloud in a slow, expressive whisper. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so pretty, I love it! And it gives a great mental image of music! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. the most gorgeous, vivid description of music i've ever heard. the pictures you painted as a haunting voice with gentle music came to my ears was fantastic. i love the idea of music embodied in a woman. this is just beyond amazing. this is your best and most accomplished piece of writing. absolutely in love with this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am a huge music dork, so I know how you feel. lovely opal moonlit poem, girl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very gorgeous. Good music can speak to your soul, and your poem applauds its majesty justly. ~~Say You'll Remember |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really incredable! The imagery you use in the discription is very beautiful... I love it! Great poem! |