hehe. thought i might check it out fer myself! doo doo doo. continue to write, as i know you are. _

-Jashi

Mercuria: Gosh, Malikai is such a bastard.

Malikai: What? You bitch, if you were a man I'd-

Mercuria: Yeah, I remember. But I'm NOT. I'm a WOMAN. So there. Besides, you couldn't kill me even if I was a man!

Malikai: Why the hell not?

Mercuria: Um ... uh ... because our names start with the same letter!

Malikai: You're not very bright.

Mercuria: I love you too, honey.

Great story! You must continue this ... I'm in love with it.

Oooh, I liked this. Malikai is cool. Are you going to write more?

! This story is AMAZING! Malikai should stop with the Tasuki language, but that just makes the character. This story is suspenseful, and you feel the emotions of each character.

Only things: you should explain more about the myth of the forest fairies when he encounters one. That would make the fairy seem more magical and understandable.

Also, develop the character of the water fairy better; she just seems kinda dull. Trust me, make her more lively, or (if she's only there to serve the main fairy), make her talk more about being a servant.

Still, i love this story and it's mythology! Great cliffhanger! Write more!

Sincerely,

Princess Kitty

I like it! Heh. Malikai needs to curb his tongue. Keep on writing Lily! Ahem. I am the Norm of the Future, and I see a great writing career in front of you! Er, whatever. Just keep it up! _ -

Intriguing Lilly-chan! me likies!

Nuriko: Will you stop saying that?

ME LIKIES ME LIKIES ME LIKIES ME LIKIES!

Nuriko: *growl*