Reviews for Needles
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Cool! This poem rocks! I love it!
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Awesome poem,creppy,and i like it that way!
deepdown chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
wow... i can imagine an almost sarcastic - no, bitter, no, argh! cant find the word for it - tone in this poem. the repetion is really effective in this one, i can imagine it as a song. i think. man, i suck at reviews.
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Oh! I love this. (*is flattered that you love her poems*) Wow! I'll try to fix the mistake you caught in the vampire poem. Thanks, I never proof-read anything. Needles...Very awesome! I'm so flattered that you loved my Saint Sinner poem...

Inner Demon begins to talk: You only encouraging her to be more weird than ever. Now look what I have to live with.

Cirien: Oh, shut up. you're mean...

Inner Deomn:That's the purpose of my existence...

Cirien: Oh, yeah...
chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 2/8/2003
Wow...man! This... *is speechless* You GOTTA write more! I like your stuff! Write more, plese?

Whee! *disappears*
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
Ooo...NICE! I loved how this repeated words and just shoved your images right in your face.

_ I liked it a lot! Keep writing!

Namir Swiftpaw
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
Scary piece. Another job well done!

Heart of the Sword
Werewolf Nighteyes chapter 1 . 1/11/2003
Scary, in it's own way. But it's a good poem. Wish I could write as well.
E. Hisifithith chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
Nifty kabifty! awesome poem! I'll never look at needles the same way again!
Toireasa chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
Interesting. Nicely written with a great flow. Nice work. Thanks for reading and reviewing Would you, Could You, I really appreciate it. . Once again, a beautiful poem, I trule enjoyed it.

Toireasa
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
Dark Shadow Poets

DarkShadowPoets
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 10/27/2002
I like the rhythm of this one! Really cool and thanks for the
Niphridell chapter 1 . 10/26/2002
interesting topic ** I like the rhythm of your poem it's gnifty!

-Nev the rabid squirrel girl
miss emtoo chapter 1 . 10/26/2002
Oh that was great! I liked the beat of it..
Liebe Sasa chapter 1 . 10/26/2002
I like it.