Reviews for Dance of Escape
Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 6/26/2003
hm...wish i could dance through life. that would be nice...
Brooke ORiley chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
excellent. i don't really know how to review poetry, but this is good stuff! can't describe how you feel after reading it...can't describe anything. blargh. you're good at this!

::goes away before she causes anymore confusion::
ShadowGal chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
Absolutely gorgeous, but a bit haunting as well. I don't know what else to say, as I'm not much good at reviewing poems unless I have something to (constructively) criticize, which isn't the case this time. Well, keep writing!
Unhappily Neverafter chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Brit: I dont like non-ryming poems, but I like this one _!

Kristi: Ditto on that.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/17/2003
It is really good...I thought of Johnny too!
Onion chapter 1 . 4/15/2003
:: wipes tear ::

that was perfect!
Lyria Shard chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
I' . I can see why this is one of your fav poems.

Sal
januaryisforever chapter 1 . 11/9/2002
Hi, Marley! ::waves to Marley, who is sitting right next to her:: ( ::Marley waves back:: ) This is a cool poem! _ Yay! Very dream-ish... and ev'ryone knows we love that stuff! ::dance:: I like the knife-y part. ::hugs Nny comics:: ( ::Marley screams:: ) Yeah. Dreams are cool. Let's dream every night! :D But nightmares make good story ideas. O.o;; Mmkay. Buh-bye!

Raven
evm chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
Awesome!I love it!It beats your other two poems even(I say that every time but it's true!Each poem is better than the one preceading it!).Hmph!How come you never showed them to me before?You evil being!Withholding wonderful poetry from unsuspecting personages!Well anyway...

*catches breath*keep writing!(or you could say versing...hm...now that I think about it that sounds better!)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
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