Reviews for Of Boredom, Psycho's, and Downfall
deepdown chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
wow... talk about shocking... kinda reaches out of the screen and slaps you around the face. i mean that in a good way. i especially like the extras in italic, i can imagine them whispered under the drone of words. whispered, and drowned effective, the entire poem. very strong emotion.
dfgsfdghftgt44 chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Wow. THat's a very strange and cool way of writing. I haven't ever thought of doing it that way. THis is great. I'm psycho...Of course, I'm sure you already know that...(*evil laugh*)

~Cirien Phoenix
Suicidal Butterfly chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Nice love how you have one word means so much. and then you have the longer sentances that make the poem, but are seemingly less important till the end.
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
I like how this is written - with the italic thoughts breaking up the general monotone of your poem. It makes your point all the more powerful.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
Very angsty...You did a good job writing this.

~Heart of the Sword
E. Hisifithith chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
Huh. This is different... hmm... But that's good of course... cuz variety is the spice of life! or sumthin like that... but anywhoozaluza... great job! Can't wait for the story that goes with it! l8a
Callik9 chapter 1 . 11/12/2002
I love the structure and can't wait to read the story!
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 10/31/2002
Really interesting with the one word lines coming down to your statements. I liked it a lot. Keep it up.~CT
Niphridell chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
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very deefrent

*_* I likes tho!

Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2002
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